A few posts back I wrote about a print I felt was unsuccessful. I had some wonderful feedback and decided to redo the print. The first thing I did was change the position of the girl. So unfortunately for the idea of a new working title she is no longer holding a “broken golf club” as per my friend Julie. Sorry Julie! Many people commented they liked the sky. I liked the sky too but I needed to adjust the color. My friend Claudia offered that she liked how the girl sort of blended with the background and also suggested I make the head a bit smaller. I did initially make the head smaller but then decided to give her hair a bit more volume which, in combination with the change in position, makes her appear at a three quarter pose which I liked more. The print is also 6 x 8 rectangle rather than a long thin rectangle.
So here is the final piece

And here is the original

What was a bonus with redoing this print was the the key block is very good and can be printed on its own and hand colored. A key block is the last color printed (generally black) and gives definition to the image. Here is the key block and a printed image of the block.

Notice the image is reversed from the block. They is how block prints are. I used to tell my student that if they were going to write anything on their blocks, they had better figure out how to write it backwards!
I like the new version and thanks for sharing your process.
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Thanks Alice. Let me know what you have been doing when you get a chance.
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Wow. Just wow. This is thrilling to see how it came out. I think it accomplishes what you were aiming for in the first version. Realizing its potential. I love the unified feeling of human and nature in harmony. Also really like the colors.
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Lovely! The way you changed the scale of the elements — swirls in the sky, amount of ground and so on – really brings it all together. And I’m good with ditching the broken golf club!
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Well certainly whoever got konked in the noggin with it is also glad!
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